FiMfictions - Bubbles and alternate ending

1,912 views · Published 2 October 2014 · 12:10 · Indexed 3 October 2026

Channel: Brawny Buck · 2014 · Entertainment

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Greetings,

In this video, I take a look at a very short FiMfiction by an anonymous author.  A story about a young Derpy who seems to obliviously suffer abuse from her mother.

I'm 90% certain that this a poorly-written cheap shot at a sadfiction.  But the missing ten percent of that certainty is loudly crying out for a second chance.  Maybe I missed something.  Maybe I'm wrong.  Let's talk about it some more.  I look forward to learning something from this.

Bubbles:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RgkrBTryVCfmAARA5ZCMTY4nTa2ta2-mhmdpxvipEoA/edit?hl=en&pli=1#%20

Raindrops and Cloudbubbles (alaternate ending) by Bowtar:
http://bowtar.deviantart.com/art/Raindrops-and-Cloudbubbles-226034921

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